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Layan,, No..oor w zaa..in 3a6ooch 3mrhm
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What? What the hell did she mean? I thought she was kidding , I froze , magdrt astaw3b , theyre..theyre .. dea … la I couldn’t say it…mb maw;9ou3 tgdar tt'3ashmar fee ya3nyy… this cant be happening
THIS COULDN’T BE REAL
Adam: (shaking my shoulders) layaaan … layaaan
Ma gdart ard 3alai knt ma9dooma , la la this cant be happening , I fell from being on my knees to the floor , adam caught me before I banged ( Shit his arms, his chest, but no ,, this all doesn’t matter now) , I couldn’t feel my body , I was crying silently somehow , how could they die..
Me: LAYAAA ENTY SHTGOOLEEEN LAAA MA MAATAAW , MAA MAATAAW
Laya cried more , everyone was staring at us , bs I didn’t care , they couldn’t have left us , la mst7eel theyree coming backkkk imm surre ,
Adam: 5ala9 layan hadyy , its ok hay ell7yaa , alla ktab lhoum hal shay .. its gonna be okay
Me: (I was shouting and crying) LAA ADAAAM ITS NOT OKAAY , KLAA BSBTBY , I TOLD THEM TOO COME HERE TODAY , ANAA ELYY GLTLHM , ANAA , LW I DIDN’T PLAN THIS ,BKOONOON ALIVE EL7EEN ,KLAA BSABABYYY , MAAY9EER YMOOTOON MAY9EEERR
Adam: layaan haaddyyyyy , bs 5ala9 this isn’t your fault , its no-ones fault alla katablhm el mot , YOU CANT CONTROL THIS OR BLAME IT ON YOURSELF CALM DOWWN
I just sat there crying ,so was laya ,after almost 2 mins I realized we had to go check on the other girls
Me: (I sniffed, whipped my tears and tried to hold myself from crying) laya yalla 5an roo7 nchoof Reem w Marya
We managed to pick ourselves up
Laya: (sniffing and whipping her tears) ee ee yallaa
Adam: la may9eer tsoogoon w entaw f hal 7ala , fe a7ad ywa9lkm ??
Me: ee o55oy mny bagoola ywa9lna (my voice was very shaky)
Adam : enzain t7amlaw f roo7km , w 3a'9m allaa ajrkm
My and laya managed to smile to him and went to my brother , I knew he was at the pool as soon as he saw us he ran to me , he could tell that we were crying ( we couldn’t stop actually)
3adel: LAYAN LAYA?! Shfeeekoum ?
I tried to swallow my tears ,but me and laya just started crying harder , he hugged me so tight , I loved his huugs, when he managed to calm us down , we told him the story and he drove us to the hospital.
When we reached I found reem and Marya's parents sitting on chairs calmly crying , noor's mother mskeena ksrt 5a6ryy she was sitting on the floor shouting : 'YEEBOLY BNTYYY , ABYY BNTYY, WLYY YSALMKM YEEBOOLY NOOOR , NOOR RDEEELYY ,MAGDAR A3EESH BEDOONCHH NOOOOR' ma gdart I started crying again , laya went to zain's mum to try and calm her down, bs ashkara there was no use (their conditions didn’t help me calm down ) ,
(I went and hugged both their mums and started crying, AGAIN )
Me: (while crying) 5alty la tsaween halon f roo7ich walla mb zain, 5alaa9 ehyaa akeed mrta7a w mstansa el7een, halon 3mr el2ensaan ely allah ktba lha be9eer w e7na mangdar n'3ayr hal shay
(even though I was hurting more than anyone in here,, cuz I was the reason behind all this I still tried to calm everyone around me )
5alty om noor: (she calmed down) layan 7abeebty atrajaach , gooleelly enha ma matat , goolely ena ana ga3da a7lm
I hugged her and said : 5alty chan zain agdar agoolich nafs el kalam , bs 5ala9 9ar ely 9ar w ma tgdreen tgoolen shy ela alla yr7amhm (more tears ran down my face )
I saw the doctor coming out glt aroo7 as2la 3an reem w Marya , everyone got up with me
Marya's mum: (while crying)ha doctor atrajak 6amnaa
The doctor kept quiet , his face was straight , I couldn’t figure out what he meant , I felt like slapping him.. madry laish ma kan ga3d yred 3alaina
Om Reem: doctor s2alnaaak shlooonhmmm ??? (she was screaming)
Doctor: Reem w Marya …
TO BE CONTINUED
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